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first of all - don't listen to that asshole, he has no idea of what he's talking about. like most whiny idiots. i got to admit, you got some pretty interesting stuff going on here. the song pretty much kicks you in the face from start to finish, and i fucking love it. i like the riffs, brutal and pretty insane haha.
vocals are pretty cool, i like your style. a couple of issues with the timing, as the retard below me so kindly pointed out, but it doesn't really take anything away from the song in my opinion. drums sound nice as well, they complement the brutality with even more badassery, haha.
all in all, i really like what you've got going on here. a bit unpolished, but still pretty fucking awesome. you should try to make a couple of cool leads in the future, and work a bit on your timing with the vocals. keep up the good work man \m/