Schleif's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[Voyage-Metaljonus]

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sure was a voyage. loved your melodies in this one. pretty original, and sounds good as fuck. the intro was cool as well, haha. great job as always man!

[Jig Masta!-Metaljonus]

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oh, fuck it - i hate you. in a good way of course, my friend. fucking awesome work

Metaljonus responds:

lmao I never knew you could hate anyone in a good way. Thanks for listening.

[Dagens Diktatur]

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IPRED kan dra åt helvete. förbjuda nerladdning, så löjligt. som att uppfinna hjulet å förbjuda folk å använda de. patetiskt, å dömt att misslyckas. skitbra låt i vilket fall. grym kvalite, som tidigare. med den här standarden kan de bara bli bättre. keep rocking \m/

[Dom Slutliga Förlorarnas Elit]

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jesus. varför låter inte mitt strykjärn såhär!? helt jävla otroligt. ja skulle kunna sitta här som en idiot å försöka va konstruktiv... eller så ger ja fan i de å skriker spontant för mig själv iställe. skitbra arbete, mina herrar. 5 å 10, naturligtvis. keep rocking \m/

Dimoria responds:

Kul å höra att du gillart ;)

[Beeeeeees!!]

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haha, didn't see that one coming. alcoholics are drinking all my bears, haha. fucking awesome! you just made my day \m/

GoreBastard responds:

Haha thanks man!!

[NS - Deceived (Swobb Style)]

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now this was interesting. pretty impressive for a second project. i like the style, but there's still alot of room for improvement. first of you need quite alot more power, at least in some passages. your tone sometimes goes down to a whisper, which makes a pretty bad contrast to the stronger passages. you should work abit on your breathing, and fill your lungs with more air for the longer passages. not sure about your technique, but make sure you don't restrain yourself. i'd take a step away from the mic and just let it all out. also remember to never change your voice or try to sound like someone else, that always turns out bad.

the reverb is nice, keep it around that level, fits the style nicely. the timing is also good, it all flows along well to the song. they actual lyrics are pretty plain though, but they do what they're suposed to do.

all in all, this is a pretty fucking kickass performance, being only your second project. but try to get a decent distance to the mic and give the vox more power. if you find it hard, then you should perhaps concider changing your technique a bit. don't be afraid to experiment. and remember to take pauses if your throat hurts, and drink alot. it'll all come with practice. good work, keep this up and you'll be making awesome vocals in no time - the potential is there, no doubt about it \m/

netty-swobb responds:

I will definalely try hold the mic further away and shiz.

He, the way do it doesn't hurt my throat, tis all good :D

Thanks dude!! \m/

[Suspended Above-Metaljonus]

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jesus. you just don't stop do you? haha, great tune anyway, you've been pretty creative for sure. awesome playing as always - keep rocking \m/

Metaljonus responds:

Nope I never stop! why stop! lol thanks for listening man!

[The Titty Ditty]

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wise words from a wise man. i expected nothing less, haha. "some point up, some point down, some ladies make them swing around" - statement of the day, haha. awesome tune, made my day for sure haha! keep it up, fucker!

TheBardOfBlasphemy responds:

haha... i'm so glad... but, fuck man, what was I thinking... really!!!!

cheers so much, glad you liked it :D

[802-Metaljonus]

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fuck man, that's insane. as always. sounds awesome in all ways. the last 2 minutes kicked ass of unimaginable size. great fucking job man! really looking forward to the finished one - keep rocking \m/

Metaljonus responds:

Thanks!

[Go to Waste]

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welcome to the portal! great work man, you got some talent. i'd probably go for a slightly heavier tone, and turn up the drums slightly in the mix though. at least the kick. the tune itself is also slightly repetitive - it screams for vocals if you ask me. still a fucking great tune man, great playing - keep rocking \m/