Schleif's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[Nox-Metaljonus]

[title]

haha, fucking great work as usual. the melodies are awesome man! you're awesome! haha yep, incredible fucking tune. unfortunately i can't see a button with a higher value than 5, so you'll have to settle with that. keep rocking \m/

[Slave and Master]

[title]

well, you certainly got a lot to work with. first of, a 3sec loop does not make a song. some variety is essential. the actual quality of the loop is also very low, but i can live with that as long as you put some more effort into your work.

about the singing, you really need to practice. first of, i cant really tell if you're trying to growl or sing, and unfortunately you don't succeed very well with any of those. you need to find your own style, and develope it, which will take time. but hey, atleast you tried, and thats worth something, so i'll give you a 5 and 2. try to look at this review in a constructive way, and keep practicing \m/

Frostvind666 responds:

Thanks for the review.

I know that I´m not good at growling/singing. At least I´m trying to learn.
And I know that a 3sec loop aint really meant for a song.
At least I´m trying and willing to learn how to make and construct music.

Anyway I´m gonna take your criticism and learn how to improve myself.

[Part 1 - Look to the Future]

[title]

fucking awesome work right here, fuckers! love the vocals. interesting transition to clean ones. good lyrics as well. and just as great playing, haha. 5 - keep rocking \m/

MetalForce responds:

Glad you liked it, man!
And we're definitely going to keep rocking, there are 8 more songs in this project, and they're all totally badass.
Thanks for the review!
TN

[Guitarandom 2]

[title]

damn, that's some brutal brutal shit you got there, man. sounds evil and asskicking, haha. this tune could use some vocals though. great work anyways, 5 - keep rocking \m/

Devastus responds:

Thanks man, I'll be sure to do rocking more in the future.

Vocals would have been in order if this wasn't just a mere guitar jamming clip with good mixing :P

[Metal Backing Track drop tuned]

[title]

whoa man, the riff about 0:25 is the fucking King of Awesome! that part made me wanna kill people and hug them and the same time. liked this one alot, my freind. heavy shit - good shit. oh and by the way, did you get my pm? replied to yours a couple of weeks ago or so, haha. migh have got fucked up. awesome tune, nonetheless - keep rocking \m/

Bad-Man-Incorporated responds:

dammit man. Sorry bro. I get a few, for sure a day. I just went back looking. My bad dude. Yeah, send me your midi's, and your drum track all separated. and if you did anything in guitar pro or anything, send me that as well. I'll PM you my email addy if you don't already. Sorry about the late reply on that. My bad dude. Thank you for the review, on this. YOu rule.

[The cold(another version)]

[title]

an ok tune, but you really need to work on your vocals. i do sense potential, but you're kind of restraining yourself, and the vox gets off pitch. but still an interesting style, and the screams work. keep practicing \m/

[el superbastardo del fuego]

[title]

haha, this is pretty awesome. didn't expect this, though. great riffs, fucking awesome tune. 5 - keep rocking \m/

DarKsidE555 responds:

Thanks man! <3

[Edge of Thorns (vox)]

[title]

pretty awesome work, though i think you should practice on your clean vocals a bit. not bad, but could be much better. a bit more 'power' perhaps, if you know what i mean. still, good work. love the chorus-part. 5 - keep rocking \m/

TwilightNecrosis responds:

No, I get what you mean.
My voice is definitely a WIP, lawl.
Thanks for the review, I appreciate it.
Rawk! \m/

[Get this (instrumental)]

[title]

this isn't good... it's evil, haha. this works, no doubt about that. a bit sharp around the edges, so to say, but i like it. great work. 5 for you - keep rocking \m/

Rourke69 responds:

Hey thanx 4 Ur review man! Maggot 4 life! 666 \m/