Schleif's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[Better than Nothing []]

[title]

ah, there you are. like this one. great shit man, keep it up!

deathkllr84 responds:

will do. \m/

[802(Final)-Metaljonus]

[title]

have i ever told you the story about how much i hate you? it's a pretty shot story. goes like this: i hate you. fortunately, i love hating you. fuck man, you are a god. keep it up! \m/

Metaljonus responds:

<3 u too ;)

[NS - Eyes Of The Cemetary]

[title]

alot of effects in this one, haha. sounds pretty good. really like the lyrics, good job. perhaps you should try working a bit on the vocal structure. all the lyrics makes your voice sound pretty strained and shit. but i like what you did to this one. good job!

netty-swobb responds:

Cheers man!

[Rebirth(final)-Metaljonus]

[title]

once upon a time, there was an ass. and you kicked it. and now with bass, woho!

Metaljonus responds:

lmao, thanks!

[NS - Arctic Combustion]

[title]

not bad man. you're getting the hang of this. a couple of flaws in the timing, but then again, this is a difficult one. the talkish part didn't sound very natural, but otherwise i've got no complaints haha. good work!

netty-swobb responds:

Cheers man!

[Remember the Killings Finished]

[title]

fuck man. really. your cleans are fucking awesome. you really impress me man, the melody and everything, it all sounds great. really great. awesome work man, i love it.

Bad-Man-Incorporated responds:

Thanks dudeface!\m/

[No Regrets]

[title]

haha, fuck yeah! kerry would be proud haha. could use a bit more.. well, overall anger, but still kicks ass haha. keep rocking bro!

Bad-Man-Incorporated responds:

Thanks man. I can't get as fuckin angry as you. I could send you a copy without vocals and you can scream your shit on it if you want. :D Fuckin fun. \m/

[Devil Plays Tag]

[title]

not too bad, but you got alot to work on. first off, the whole instrumental track could be alot louder, it's currently completely drowned by the vocals. are you using some sort of software or something to alter your voice by the way? sure sounds like it. and unfortunately it doesn't sound very good. all you need is practise though. the drums sound pretty weak, but with some decent mixing it could probably sound alot better. all in all it's a decent effort, but you could still improve in all areas. keep practising man!

Nametolong responds:

Well to your surpise I did not use any voice altering software, I'm using my inward screaming the vocals are mine :D
the echo has something to do with me using a rockband mic, and the drums are created using fl stuidos, and the guitar playing is my own,
I've been screaming about a year now and i've play guitar six,
I do admitt I need alot of pratice on the recording and editing haha,
Thanks for your crit! :D_[

[Nightmare ['09]]

[title]

great work man, love this one. reminds me a bit of early metallica. well mixed and shit as well. awesome man, keep it up \m/

Demon-Slayer12 responds:

Thanks dude, I think its a cross between Metallica and Pantera....minus Dimebag's awesomeness...haha..seems to be what most people compare it to anyway.
Should be some new tunes coming after September....not just solo material either.

[Cursedwvox-MetalJonus]

[title]

good job man, i like the sound of this. evil and brutal, and i don't ask for anything else, haha. here's the 5

Metaljonus responds:

Thanks!